Monday, April 15, 2013

A Sneak Peek

So I haven't really done this before, giving sneak peeks I mean, but here is a tiny little bit, a single paragraph, from the first chapter of one of the stories I'm working on:

Every time she smiles his heart skips a beat.  He's always sauve and collected when he talks to the girls in their class but when she looks at him, all of his confidence leeches out of him.  She's like the sun in the sky and if he doesn't see her every day he feels as if his world is collapsing around him. 
There you have it.  Now do you wonder... Who is he? Who is she? 

And what the heck is their story? 

4 comments:

  1. I just liked LD Ferris on Facebook. I confirmed it. I cannot wait to hear.....the rest of the story. GR8 idea...the sneak peak too. Blessings to you and yours.

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  2. great teaser! love the desperate emotion!

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